Tuesday, 22 October 2013

nathan week 8

One night it was Halloween and the wind was banging against the glass. At Hobsonville Point School there was a Halloween festival. Everyone was dressed up as Slender. One of the Kids,Eddy went to the the haunted hallway, when he was walking down the hallway there was a Door creaking open and slender was there. eddy stood there and he rubbed his eyes and Slender was gone! When he turned around slender was still gone so when Eddy went back to the festival. When he was walking down the haunted hallway he was starting to run because he heard...

1 comment:

  1. Great build-up in your story Nathan. I especially like the way you describe how the door opens. Keep up the great writing :)

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