Sunday, 1 December 2013
poor mosic
“Awwwwwwww” and then the noise stopped “ what’s that?””Its just Mosic” Mosic is our pet wolf we adopted when we were hunting. At first when we got near him we were scared but then he licked our fingers like he was a tamed dog!I said to my sister kelly that he will be fine and nothing will happen to him. I was wrong.Two hours later he was attacked by wild wolf pack. The next morning I woke up to howling and screaming . I went outside to see what happen and his leg was broken and bleeding badly.His leg had to be amputated!
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Hello Ariarna,
ReplyDeleteYour story certainly has some surprising twists and turns to keep your readers in suspense! I thought it would be a story with a happy ending, but you surprised me.
I liked when you wrote, "....he licked our fingers like he was a tamed dog!" and "...I woke up to howling and screaming." Those words helped me to visualize the story in my mind.
Barbara McFall (Team 100WC)
Teacher at The Phoenix School, Salem, MA USA