It was a sunny day at school and the kids were telling scary stories about the blood knight.
Two new girls didn’t believe it. Later that night, all of the kids were trick or treating and the two girls were looking around the school. They were not scared, that all changed when they found BLOOD FOOT PRINTS. They ran to the doors but they were locked in. So they hid and they kept on hearing metal rattling together. They got out of hiding, they tried every door around the school and the rattling kept getting closer and closer and they...
I really enjoyed reading this Maia. I like how you have included lots of details about what was happening it really hooks me in and makes me want to read more.
ReplyDeleteOooh Maia, you scared me! I liked how you built the story up because then the blood foot prints came as a real shock. I want to know what happens next!
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